The Challenge
Pick one of the Fall images (provided) and write a 200 word-max piece inspired by that picture.
My Entry: SKELETON CAREER DAY (195 words)
Blustering into the dingy café, the skeleton plonked his weary bones on the chair.
“How did it go?” said his rickety friend. “Did you share your ambitions?”
The skeleton leaned towards the candle in the centre of the table and his eye sockets lit up. “I told her I wanna be a crash-test dummy! I wanna save lives with my bones.” He waved his scraggy hand in the air, painting a picture with his phalanges.
“And?” His friend rubbed his hand-bones together. “What did she say?”
The skeleton hung his skull. “She said I didn’t have the stomach for it.”
His friend thoughtfully tapped his chin. “I thought you wanted to be a stand-up comedian?”
“I did, but she said there’s not a funny bone in my body.” He gloomily swigged his pumpkin-spiced latte, which cascaded through his bones and puddled by his metatarsals. “I even volunteered to be part of a skeleton crew—”
“Oof, not many of those about.”
“What can I say? I was desperate!”
“So, what did she mark you down for, in the end?”
The skeleton slumped and rubbed a bony hand over his bony pate. “The usual. Halloween decoration.”
I LOVED this! Your skeleton had a great character voice and what a funny concept. And the perfect ending. Good luck!
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s so lovely of you to say! Thank you! 😍
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ha ha! I love your sense of humor, but more skeleton. He wanted so much more!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much! 😍 There’s always next year for our skeleton friend. 😆
LikeLiked by 1 person
I meant “poor” skeleton, not more!
LikeLike
You had me laughing at the get-go with the title – career day – so original and creative. I loved all the humor and the voice ooozed out of this. Great job! Good luck!
LikeLike
Thank you, Alicia, for your lovely comment! It’s put a spring in my step today! 😍
LikeLike
This is so much fun! I love the pumpkin latte puddling by his metatarsals. Good luck!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Sarah! We should all treat ourselves to pumpkin-spiced lattes! 😍
LikeLike
This is so funny! Well done and good luck
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Sue! 😍
LikeLike
This is so funny! Great job!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Kelly! 😍
LikeLike
Best line: “The usual.” 🙂
Nicely done! Good luck!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hahaha! So fun and so funny!
LikeLiked by 1 person
This was delightful and had me smiling from beginning to end!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Meghan! 😍
LikeLike
LOL. Seriously, this made me laugh out loud. Such a hilarious anatomic, comedic piece with clever word choice (“scraggy,” “swigged”) and puns (“don’t have the stomach for it.) And the story fits the image so well. Bone-us points for ingenious STEM elements! @AnneLipton
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, Anne, for your wonderful comment. It has certainly put a spring in my step today! And, hats off to you for the punmanship!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Such a fun read! Very lever and unique.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Rose! 😍
LikeLike
I laughed out loud at “didn’t have the stomach for it!” Very clever story. Poor skeleton with his great ambitions.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Heather! 😍 So pleased it tickled some ribs! 😄
LikeLiked by 1 person
Poor skeleton! Thanks so much for sharing your art humor with us for the Fall Writing Frenzy!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Bravo Gen! I thought all the puns worked, and your descriptions were great for conjuring up images in a reader’s mind. Your whole dialogue perfectly fit the photo… truly perfect pairing. I feel like if you found the right cartoonist, this would make an outstanding story for a comic, taken even further into giggle territory. Good luck. Stay well.✌🏼💙🎶🎨📚😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Annie! Your comment has really made my day! And what a fab idea to get a little artistic with it… You’ve got my creative cogs turning. 💙✨
LikeLike